Baw thank you! I’m glad you think so. This is certainly proving to be a lesson in drawing architecture.
(PS, sorry your comment disappeared on pg 25– WordPress mysteriously ate the update and I had to repost the page :’C)
Can I give you my honest opinion? In the third Panel, the way you merge the two speech bubble tails together, doesn’t look very appealing. I also noticed in previous pages your speech bubble tails are quite wide. This might be your style, in which case, carry on doing so but I think that they distract from the rest of the page.
Thank you for the feedback! When creating chapter 1 I didn’t finalize the speech bubbles until after completing the artwork, which unfortunately led to some admittedly wonky speech bubbles. I will be finalizing the speech bubbles before the artwork in chapter 2 so the layouts should be much better. 🙂
4 thoughts on “Ch 1 Page 27”
Kollerline
You’re so good at drawing buildings and your backgrounds are amazing! They blow me away every time 😀
Michelle
Baw thank you! I’m glad you think so. This is certainly proving to be a lesson in drawing architecture.
(PS, sorry your comment disappeared on pg 25– WordPress mysteriously ate the update and I had to repost the page :’C)
Dimaar
Can I give you my honest opinion? In the third Panel, the way you merge the two speech bubble tails together, doesn’t look very appealing. I also noticed in previous pages your speech bubble tails are quite wide. This might be your style, in which case, carry on doing so but I think that they distract from the rest of the page.
Michelle
Thank you for the feedback! When creating chapter 1 I didn’t finalize the speech bubbles until after completing the artwork, which unfortunately led to some admittedly wonky speech bubbles. I will be finalizing the speech bubbles before the artwork in chapter 2 so the layouts should be much better. 🙂
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