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Ch 1 Page 27

Happy Friday folks! Enjoy your page 27!

4 thoughts on “Ch 1 Page 27

  1. You’re so good at drawing buildings and your backgrounds are amazing! They blow me away every time 😀

    1. Baw thank you! I’m glad you think so. This is certainly proving to be a lesson in drawing architecture.
      (PS, sorry your comment disappeared on pg 25– WordPress mysteriously ate the update and I had to repost the page :’C)

  2. Can I give you my honest opinion? In the third Panel, the way you merge the two speech bubble tails together, doesn’t look very appealing. I also noticed in previous pages your speech bubble tails are quite wide. This might be your style, in which case, carry on doing so but I think that they distract from the rest of the page.

    1. Thank you for the feedback! When creating chapter 1 I didn’t finalize the speech bubbles until after completing the artwork, which unfortunately led to some admittedly wonky speech bubbles. I will be finalizing the speech bubbles before the artwork in chapter 2 so the layouts should be much better. 🙂

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