Baw thank you! I’m glad you think so. This is certainly proving to be a lesson in drawing architecture.
(PS, sorry your comment disappeared on pg 25– WordPress mysteriously ate the update and I had to repost the page :’C)
Can I give you my honest opinion? In the third Panel, the way you merge the two speech bubble tails together, doesn’t look very appealing. I also noticed in previous pages your speech bubble tails are quite wide. This might be your style, in which case, carry on doing so but I think that they distract from the rest of the page.
Thank you for the feedback! When creating chapter 1 I didn’t finalize the speech bubbles until after completing the artwork, which unfortunately led to some admittedly wonky speech bubbles. I will be finalizing the speech bubbles before the artwork in chapter 2 so the layouts should be much better.
4 thoughts on “Ch 1 Page 27”
Kollerline
You’re so good at drawing buildings and your backgrounds are amazing! They blow me away every time
Michelle
Baw thank you! I’m glad you think so. This is certainly proving to be a lesson in drawing architecture.
(PS, sorry your comment disappeared on pg 25– WordPress mysteriously ate the update and I had to repost the page :’C)
Dimaar
Can I give you my honest opinion? In the third Panel, the way you merge the two speech bubble tails together, doesn’t look very appealing. I also noticed in previous pages your speech bubble tails are quite wide. This might be your style, in which case, carry on doing so but I think that they distract from the rest of the page.
Michelle
Thank you for the feedback! When creating chapter 1 I didn’t finalize the speech bubbles until after completing the artwork, which unfortunately led to some admittedly wonky speech bubbles. I will be finalizing the speech bubbles before the artwork in chapter 2 so the layouts should be much better.