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Ch 3 Page 2

A new face greets Midori inside the train... And quickly learns not to touch her stuff.

5 thoughts on “Ch 3 Page 2

  1. Verily, she hath the foul stench of official busybody about her–what may that portend?

    I just found this comic on the sidebar ad on TWC, and now here I am at the current latest page. Your artistic performance is WAY above average. The backgrounds are beautiful, each character is unique, the expressions are top-notch, and the hands actually look like hands. In a word, impressive!

    As good as the art is, my main focus is always on the story itself, and you shine there as well. The story is compelling, and I like the way you are telling it as you build the world with an absolute minimum of exposition. I also find the character interactions realistic and unforced. I’m eager to see where you go from here, and I plan to travel with you as you go. 🙂

    1. Thank you SO much for the thoughtful comment! So glad to hear you’re enjoying the art and story so far, I hope that you’ll enjoy the upcoming chapter! 😀

    2. MatchaTea_IsForMe

      I fully agree with this comment!

  2. Never heard about magic word, Midori? I think you are overreactiong a bit.

    1. Midori’s motto is fight first, say “please” later! Haha.

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